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nowadays many young parents改错 短文改错how time flies

短文改错,大神帮帮我!短文改错,每句一个错误,有一句没有错误. 1.I...

首先要知道短文改错就是针对中国人学英语的习惯思维出的,是中国人都容易犯的那些错误,所以只要做做短文改错(一定要完全搞懂)就会大幅度提高,因为思维习惯再不同也不可能完全不同的,有极限的,建议100篇以内,不要太多哈,基本就清楚反复考那些了,高三毕业班大都会这么干的。如果基础比较汗的话,建议做做单选题,建议100题以上哈,不能太少!单选题是练语法的核心,单选题好的话再差都有七分!祝进步一.动词形主要包括两类错误:动词的时态和语态错误,以及主、谓不一致的错误。例如:Myfavouriresportisfootball.Iwasamemberofourschoolfootballteam.isNowmypictureandprizeishanginginthelibrary.are上述两例分别属于时态错误和主、谓不一致错误。找出此类错误的关键是树立牢固的时态概念,注意短文内容发生或存在的时间,保持时间概念的一致性。二.名词数指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。例如:…sothatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.subjects三.区分形和副及区分形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错的常考点。例如:w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.mI’msurewe’llhaveawonderfullytimetogether.wonderful Unfortunate,therearetoomanypeopleinmyfamily.Unfortunately需要注意的是,形容词多用来做定、表、补语等,而副词只能在句子中作状语,修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子。第一例中的wonderful作定语修饰time,第二句的Unfortunately作状语修饰整个句子。四.非为动词细辨别w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有分词和动名词类错误,也包括不定式类错误。例如:…inmysparetime,butnowIaminterestinginfootball.interestedPlayfootballnotonlymakesusgrowuptallandstrongbutalso…playingMyparentsloveme…andwilldoalltheycan∧makesure…to上述二、三例分别是动名词作主语,和不定式作目的状语。一般的,现在分词有主动态和进行时的含义,而过去分词具有被动态和完成时的含义,不定式有将来时态的含义。五.习惯用法要记住主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识。这也是历年高考的常考点,其错误表现形式主要有三种:多词、少词和搭配错误。例如:Itwasverykindforthemtomeetmeattherailwaystationand…ofWemustkeepinmindthatweplayfortheteaminstead∧ourselves.of六.句子成分多分析不同的句子成分要用不同的词类;不同的语景要选择不同的词语。这些都有待我们对句子结构和句子成分作细致的分析,才能找出用词不当的错误。例如:They∧eagertoknoweverythingaboutChinaand…wereIliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.which第一例漏掉了谓语动词were,这是受寒于习惯的影响而导致的错误;第二例则是词类与它在句子中的成分不相符,where是副词,不能作主语。七.逻辑错误须关注与句子的上、下文不一致,甚至相矛盾,属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴,人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误,常是这类错误的考查对象。例如:TheSmithsdidhisbesttomakemefeelathome.theirFirst,letmetellyousomethingmoreaboutmyself.去掉more…nowayofsettingthematterexceptbysellingtheset.Nowsomeoneathomereadsinstead.everyonew.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m上述第一例中的主语是Smiths(史密斯夫妇俩),因此后面的his不合逻辑。第二例中的more在这儿表“再”的意思,才开始告诉别人,怎么能说“再告诉你一些事”?第三例讲的是为了解决看电视时的争端,“我们”把电视机卖了;晚上没电视看了,所以与从前一样,大家又都读书了,所以该用everyone。除了上述错误类型外,常考的错误形式还有:连词but,and,or和so的用法错误(可以归类为逻辑错误),以及冠词的用法错误等。例如: Shewassmilingbutnoddingatme.and Itlooksasifmyparentstreatmeasavisitorandaguest.or Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof.the下面是全国高考试题中的短文改错题。这道题较全面地反映了本文的口诀。现在请你试着做一做,然后参阅题后的答案与简析。LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daytriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamous76._____Mountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweather77._____Wasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootof78._____themountain,thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Aswe79._____climbedthemountain,weedmonkeys,visitingtemples80._____andtoldstories.OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicture81._____sincethescenerywassobeautiful.Thetimepassesquickly.82._____Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetop83._____ofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewas84._____good.IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmy85._____headtouchedthepillow.答案与简析:76.famous前加上a。(名词数)。77.正确78.we前面加when,引导一个时间状语从句。(句子成分多分析)79.them→us(逻辑错误须关注)80.visiting→visited(非谓动词细辨别)81.picture→pictures(名词数)82.passes→passed(动词形)83.去掉down(习惯用法要记住)84.and→but(but,and,or和so)85.去掉at(句子成分多分析/习惯用法要记住)。下面再次让我们熟悉一下短文改错的设错规律:错误类型包括缺词、多词和错词。其中1行正确,9行需要改正。正确1111多一词2121缺一词2211错一词5667难度系数0.440.420.470.46短文改错常见错误类型w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m1.谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点常见动词错误类型有①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;②and前后动词时态不一致;③主谓不一致;④缺少动词,特别是be动词;⑤第三人称单数形式错用;⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。1)Theydidnotwantmetodoanyworkathome;theywantmetodevoteallmytimetomystudies.(did改为do错误类型属于①)2)Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.(visiting改为visited错误类型属于②)3)Therewillanimportantgamenextmonth.(will后加be错误类型属于④)4)Oneeveningshetoldmethatsomethinghappenedwhenherparentswasout.(③主谓不一致)2.名词的常见错误单复数名词错用;注意区分名词是可数还是不可数;或根据名词前的修饰语或谓语动词的单复数来判断。①I’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.(subject改为subjects)②Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome.(word改为words)③Withoutenoughknowledges,youcanneverteachwell.(knowledges改为knowledge)3.连词错误连词包括关系代词、副词,并列连词and/or/but等(一般考查从句关系who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether)①Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.(错用了who的所有格形式改为whose)②Iteachthem,playwiththem,butwatchthemgrowingup.(此处应该是并列的关系而非转折,but改为and)③Cleverassheis,butsheworksveryhard.④WhenIwasachild,rainwasamystery.Inoneclass,Ilearneditrained.4.冠词错误w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m误用a和an(根据单词的因素来判定);误用a和the(固定搭配,各自单独使用的地方)多余的冠词或则少冠词。①Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof.(a改为thethesame是固定搭配)②Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamousmountainwithallkindsofpants.(mountain是可数名词需用冠词,所以加a)③Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydairy.④Ihopeyouhavepleasantjourney.5.形容词和副词错误w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m1)系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词smell/feel)2)词性的误用形容词修饰名词修饰实义动词,形容词和副词,过去分词用副词①I’msurewe’llhaveawonderfullytimetogether.(time是名词所以要用形容词wonderful修饰)②Mypronunciationwasterribly.6.代词错误1)代词的主格和宾格(I/me;He/him;She/her;We/us;They/them)2)反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)3)代词的单数和复数4)多余的代词和少代词①SoonIbegantoenjoytalkingtomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.(expressoneself,me改为myself)②OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.(加it)③Ifanyoneofushadanydifficultyinourlifeandstudy,theotherwouldhelphimout.④What’smore,youhavetobefriendswithyourpupilsandtakegoodcareofhim.7.非谓语动词的常见错误1)不定式,动名词作主语,宾语。2)and连接的不定式或动名词前后一致(尤其距离较远时),3)介词后用动名词ving形式作宾语。4)某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。①SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwas….(enjoy后需接动名词talk--talking)②Buthisparentsthinkgotocollegeismoreimportantthanplayingsports.(作主语改为going)③Childrenmaynotdevelopthehabitofreadandtheabilitytoenjoythemselves.④Iparticularlyenjoyeddrivingthroughthecountrysidewithyouandsawthechangingcolorsoftheleavesonthetrees.8.介词错误1)词组中的介词误用,2)介词意思理解偏差,3)介词的多用或少用①Therearetoomanypeopleamongmyfamily.(among改为ininmyfamily为固定搭配)②IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.(去掉at)短文改错解题思路和检查原则1)句中各部分的结构是否完整,特别是每个句子要有动词;2)谓语动词的时态、语态;3)非谓语动词的用法;w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m4)名词的单、复数,格的使用是否正确;5)定冠词和不定冠词是否正确;6)代词的格和性的使用是否有误;7)定语从句中关系代词、副词是否准确无误;8)并列句中的并列连词、主从复合句中的从属连词用的是否得当。短文改错解题四原则1)改动以最少为原则2)虚词以添加或删除为原则3)实词以改变词形为原则4)以保持句子原意为原则短文改错解题步骤1)通读全文,掌握大意2)整句分析,逐行推敲3)反复通读,复查验证解题注意要点和能力培养①核对错项时,若的确有一时难以改出的地方。可以参考所改动项是否基本符合“1126”等题型比例。正确1个,多一词1个,缺词2个,错词6个。②核对改正的语法项目是否有重复。因为短文改错往往覆盖面广,一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象。原文中每行改动只能改一词,答案也只能是一词。③核对答题符号是否规范,位置是否准确,看看有无遗漏符号,忽略字母大写和拼写等问题④如有两行都难以找到错误时,与其乱改一行,不如都打“√”以确保一行正确。⑤从作文入手,提高自身语言运用素质⑥合作学习,帮批帮改,提高识错、纠错能力⑦精炼短文改错,抓好写、比、改三步

短文改错.How time flies!Three years have

How time flies ! Three years has passed

【three years 作为一个整体,谓语用单数】

我是英文盲~要高考了求各位大侠们给我高考英语作文上写几句高考必用句...

09年高考英语作文题目预测

预测1: 刘翔退赛

在2008年北京奥运会上,中国著名运动员刘翔因腿伤退出比赛,引起人们的广泛争议,下面是腾讯网站的一项调查:运动员受伤后,应该坚持还是应该退出?

选项名称 投票数 百分比 趋势

应该退出,健康比金钱重要 34.77% 上升

运动场就是战场,刘翔应该坚持 19.36% 上升

请你结合上表,写一篇英语短文,谈谈自己的看法.

In the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games Chinese athlete Liu Xiang dropped out of the race due to his foot injury, which led to a heated discussion among people across the country.

According to a survey conducted by Tencent Website, about 34% of the people think an athlete should quit the race when injured since health is much more important than a gold medal; While nearly 20% of the netizens believe that an injured athlete should hold on to the end instead of giving up halfway. They regard the sport field as a battlefield in which every athlete should fight for the honor of his or her country in spite of any difficulty.

预测2:北京奥运

经过运动员们16天的激烈拼搏,第29 届奥运会于2008年8月24日在北京落下帷幕.中国运动员发挥出色,获得了51枚金牌,为中国赢得了巨大的荣誉.奥运会期间,有很多值得我们回味的地方.你作为一名中学生—李华,围绕奥运会对人类的影响,谈一下自己的看法,题目自拟.

注意:词数120左右.

What a Great Olympic Games!

The 29th Olympic Games has been over in Beijing, China on August 24,2008, which has left a great impression on the whole world. About 204 countries and regions attended the Olympic Games. In the Games, our Chinese athletes have won 51 gold medals, while America,36; Russia,23. This is the first time that we, Chinese athletes have won so many gold medals in one Olympic Games, which means our sports games belong to the first class in the world!

It is our athletes’ intelligence and other qualities that have won the great honor for us Chinese all! Days when we were looked down upon have gone forever! From the very Games, we have proved that our government has the ability to hold the Olympic Games successfully! Not only can we hold the Olympic Games well, but also we can perform well. The fact has showed everything to the world! It is the successful 29th Olympic Games that destroys the saying of those who doubted about it days ago! What a great, successful and impressive Olympic Games!

预测3: 翟志刚首次太空行走

2008年9月25日,中国成功地将三人小组送入太空,其中航天员翟志刚在太空首次行走,这是我国自2003年以来最具有挑战性的太空任务.请简单介绍此次 “神舟七号”的有关情况.内容包括:

1.这是一次具有历史使命的飞行,而且技术上的成果基本都是我国自主研发的.

2.这次的任务主要是太空行走,它将有助于中国在未来几年内建立中国的第一个空间站.

注意:载人飞船manned spaceship/spacecraft; 出舱活动an extra-vehicular activity;空间站space station

Shenzhou-Ⅶ, which was shot up into space on September 25,returned to Earth three days later, having completed its historic mission.

预测4:高三备考复习效率

在紧张的高三备考阶段,英语老师为了提高复习效率,广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华,请根据以下提示,给英语老师写封信,表达你们的需求和建议。

●适当放慢进度,留出思考时间

●反复训练重要、易错知识点

●指导方法

●减少作业量以保证质量

●给予更多鼓励

注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;

3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.

By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.

预测5:奥运会获奖运动员的高薪问题

近几年,奥运会获奖运动员的高薪问题引起了广泛的社会关注。有些人支持这种做法,认为运动员们付出了很多努力,应该得到回报;有些人则持反对意见。请你就此写一篇100词左右的英语短文并发表自己的看法。

In recent years, the topic whether it is fair for athletes to pocket large sums of money has aroused more and more discussion.

Those who support giving sportsmen high salaries think that athletes have won a great reputation for our country in the Olympic Games. What’s more, athletes must undergo painstaking physical and psychological training. Besides, they offer a lot of encouragement to young people to take part in physical activities.

However, some people have different ideas. They consider that athletes do little to boost the national economy directly. Thus they should not receive so much money.

I believe that they should get high salaries, considering all the efforts they have made.

预测6:高考状元与广告

高考过后,总有一些学习用品商家千方百计在高考状元身上下工夫,让状元们说是使用过他们的产品后才取得了优异成绩。请你用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,谈谈自己的看法。内容应包括以下要点:

1. 简要描述这种现象; 2. 给状元们提一点建议。

注意:

1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

2. 参考词汇:状元 Number One Scholar;产品 product;适合suitable

After the college entrance exams, some companies that sell learning products are always trying to do anything they can to make full use of Number One Scholars in order to sell their products.

In fact, it’s not easy for students to become Number One Scholars. Most of them succeed not because of the products, but their proper way of learning and hard work. Every student has his own way of studying, so the Number One Scholars’ experience may not be suitable for all the students. Most important of all, not all of these products are good enough to help us study.

I do hope that Number One Scholars can think of the poor students instead of themselves only.

预测6 假设你是李红,你的一位美国笔友Robert写E-mail问及你高考后暑假的安排,请根据以下要点,写一封100词左右的email回复他, 可以适当增加细节。

1. 学开车 2. 参加英语培训课程 3. 去北京看奥运会 4. 游览北京的名胜

注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。

Dear Robert,

How time flies!

【命题方向与写作提示】

高考英语书面表达写作素材都是与中学生的日常生活相关的话题,会避免出现考生不熟悉的话题,也不会出现农村或城市学生不熟悉的话题,注重考查考生的语言表达能力。本篇素材考查书信体裁的作文,是应用文的写作,话题涉及社会热点:北京奥运会,内容与中学生的实际生活相关:高考后暑假的安排,体裁是书信体的电子邮件。写作要点包括:1)问候;2)引入话题:高考临近,高考后的安排;3)学开车;4)参加英语培训课程;5)去北京看奥运会;6)游览北京的名胜;7)结束语。

【写作提示】

书面表达一定要注意要点齐全,写作中要注意适当增加细节以使上下文连贯,并使用一定数量的句式结构。

范文 (One possible version)

Dear Robert:

How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However,I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon.

That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?

Best wishes!

造成的原因:

1. 气候变化,造成粮食减产

2. 工业发展,城市化加速,耕地减少

3. 世界能源价格上涨,使用粮食生产生物燃料

应对的措施:

1. 注重环保,改善生态

2. 严格保护耕地

3. 富国支持穷国,促进世界和谐

你如何做出自己的贡献

1.……

2.……

注意:1. 内容包括以上要点,但不要逐句翻译

2. 字数150左右,文章开头已提供,不计入总词数

3. 参考词汇:城市化 urbanization 生物燃料 biofuels

Hello, everyone,

Now I’ll tell you something about our research project The World Food Crisis on behalf of our group. As you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas。

【命题方向与写作提示】

这是一篇提纲式的议论文写作素材,探讨国计民生的社会热点话题:粮食价格上涨。写作时要注意避免逐句翻译,并适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

范文 (One possible version)

Hello, everyone,

Then what should we do to deal with the problem? On one hand, we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology. On the other hand, strict measures should be taken to protect farmland. Of course, to build a harmonious world the developed countries should take their responsibilities to help the poor ones experiencing food shortage.

As for me, I will call on the people around me to live thriftily. And for the moment, I think, we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future.

预测8 下表是某校关于中学生双休日活动现状的一份调查,请结合表格内容,用英语写一篇120—150单词的短文,就中学生应如何过双休日发表你的看法。

学习情况 几乎都在学习 半天学习半天活动 几乎都在做其他事情

16% 24% 60%

娱乐休闲 体育活动 游玩和购物 上网看电视

20% 40% 40%

去图书馆 经常 偶尔 几乎没有

5% 23% 72%

课外兴趣小组 经常 偶尔 不参加

10% 20% 70%

范文 (One possible version)

This form displays the result of a survey on how to spend students’ weekend. It says that few students are glued to their schoolwork any more. Instead, they prefer to surf on the internet, watch TV, go shopping rather than involve in sports games. Library and interest groups are available but not favourable.

Personally I think, students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged. They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out. More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally. Besides, more interest groups should be established for students to widen their horizon and sharpen their brains so that they can become more creative eventually. All these will contributes a lot to a well-informed and highly qualified teenager.

In conclusion, students should be more scheduled with colorful and fruitful activities.

预测9假如你是李明,你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试,都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信,向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点:

焦虑症状 建 议

头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等

1.考前制定好合适的复习计划

2.考试期间正常作息

3.睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠

其他建议(内容由考生自己拟定)

注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;

3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。

参考词汇:头晕—dizzy(adj.)

Dear editor,

I’m Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I’m writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

范文 (One possible version)

I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.

First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.

Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.

(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)

预测10 在紧张的高三备考阶段,英语老师为了提高复习效率,广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华,请根据以下提示,给英语老师写封信,表达你们的需求和建议。

●适当放慢进度,留出思考时间

●反复训练重要、易错知识点

●指导方法

●减少作业量以保证质量

●给予更多鼓励

注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;

3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.

范文 (One possible version)

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.

By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.

预测11 如今,在我们身边,父母均在外打工的留守儿童比比皆是。关注留守儿童,事构建和谐社会的重要内容。关注留守儿童,要靠全社会的共同努力。你认为留守儿童面临的主要问题有那些?为了解决留守儿童的问题,请你向当地政府提建议

提示:1.缺乏父母的关爱,性格孤僻,学习压力大、自卑。

2.缺乏安全保障(家庭关心不够,容易犯错误甚至犯罪)。

建议:1.学校建立留守儿童心里咨询室,老师应该把爱播撒到每一个留守儿童的心田。

2.政府利用节假日建立留守儿童家长学校。

3.社会各界开展与留守儿童一帮一结对子的活动。

4.父母尽可能回到孩子身边,给孩子生活上和学习上的帮助和关爱。

Dear Mayor,

I'm a middle school student. I'm writing to tell you something around us. Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose parents work away from their hometowns. Most of them are from the countryside, you know, they have many problem. They are always lonely and stressed out because they are short of their parents' love. At the same time, they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the laws, because they're short of their families' care.

How to solve their problems? In my eyes, the government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays; you can organize" hand-in-hand" activity to call on more people to help them. You can also raise money to donate to these children. As the song says:"If everyone gives their love, the world will be better." It's very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious society.

Best wishes to you!

Sincerely,

LiuHua

预测12 “鸟巢”介绍

假如你是一名导游,请你根据所给的提示,向来北京观光的外国游客介绍2008年北京奥运会主体育场——“鸟巢”。

场馆名称:国家体育场(鸟巢)

建设地点:奥林匹克公园

建筑面积:258,000平方米;长330m;宽220m;高69.2m

座席数:91,000

赛时功能:奥运会开幕式和闭幕布式;田径、足球

赛后功能:体育比赛和文化、娱乐活动中心

开工时间:2003年12月24日

完工时间:2007年底

评价:中国十大新建筑奇迹之一

注意:

1. 不要逐条翻译;

2.字数:100左右。开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:开幕式和闭幕式 Opening and Closing ceremonies

娱乐活动 entertainment

平方米 square metres

Welcome to Beijing!

That’s all! Thank you!

参考范文

Welcome to Beijing! I’d like to introduce you to the Beijing National Stadium, also known as Bird’s Nest. The stadium is located in Beijing Olympic Park , covering 258,000 square metres. It is 330 metres long, 220 metres wide, and 69.2 metres tall. The construction began on December 24,2003, and was completed at the end of 2007. The splendid Opening and Closing ceremonies are to take place in Bird’s Nest, which will hold the main track and field events as well as football matches during the games. Afterwards the 91,000-seat stadium will serve as the center of sports events, cultural activities and entertainment. It has been honored as one of the latest wonders buildings in China.

That’s all! Thank you!

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